Highlight your innovation
Improving processes is a valuable skill, and this summary shows how the candidate did just that. By introducing a new onboarding process, they demonstrated their ability to identify inefficiencies and solve them, ultimately saving the company time.
Tie your achievements to employee growth
Improving employee retention rates is a strong point in the context of a Training Manager. This point shows the candidate’s understanding of the importance of career development programs in keeping employees committed, engaged, and productive.
Showcase your direct contribution
Linking your efforts directly to a positive business outcome is a surefire way to get a recruiter's attention. Here, the candidate hasn’t just mentioned their role in the revenue increase, but quantified it. The '20% revenue increase' is tangible proof of their effectiveness.